Rough Cut Feedback

I asked friends and relative over christmas to look at my magazine rough cuts and tell me what i should improve. I rounded up different people and got them to write short sentences on post it notes of improvements.

 

From analysing what people said, I wrote down what I should improve on , on my product on the post it notes. 

• Images are needed for contents and double page spread
• The images also have to relate to the genre of electronic music that i looked into on the comparison post.
• I need to make the picture big enough on the double page spread so that it works well with the writing and looks professional.
• Also need to make the title bigger on the double page spread but it was being difficult on InDesgin, so may need to make the image on photoshop and transfer it in. 
• Make sure there is a bit more writing on the front cover on the top left hand side because it looks a bit empty. 
• And finally look through writing in all the products and check for spelling mistakes.